गजल-१०
नपिउँदै पिए जस्तो मात हुनु कति मजा
एकान्तमा आफैंसंग बात हुनु कति मजा
रातभरि दुख्ने दिल बिहान पनि त दुख्छ
बिहान कुरी पीर खिच्ने रात हुनु कति मजा
सराबरी ऋतु जस्तै यहाँ मान्छे बाँच्नु पर्छ
निर्धो दुख्दा सवलमाथि घात हुनु कति मजा
सबै हामी मिल्यौं भने नाट्य पर्दा केका लागि ?
भेद नाच्ने पर्दा ढाल्ने हात हुनु कति मजा
फूललाई भिन्न लाग्ने कसले भन्छ फूल हुन्छ
तिम’ले मैले सोचे जस्तै जात हुनु कति मजा
Namaskar !!
I am happy that Puranaghare’s creation is published. That is very great but this is gazal I think. May I know why it is published under the heading of Rubai.
I am hopeful that the admin will relocate the category of this article. I am still very happy that a creation of him is published.
Thank you so much. It was by mistake and it is corrected now.
It is little vague to understand what it necessarily means by “I am happy that Puranaghare’s creation is published……… I am still very happy that a creation of him is published.”
“नपिउँदै पिए जस्तो मात हुनु कति मजा
एकान्तमा आफैंसंग बात हुनु कति मजा”
हो, एकान्त सँग नै वास्तविक वात हुन्छ; मनको बह आँफै संसारमा पोख्न पनि एकान्त नै चहिन्छ ।
आनन्दको अरको नाम एकान्त त हो नी, होइन र !
निकै मीठो गजल , expecting more …
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Bhola ji…
Really nice creation.You were there….hope YOU will come with more creation …
someone is really intoxicated by YOUR power of imagination.Hope there will be the environment what YOU have created(thought) in the lines of YOUR creation…keep it UP!
really nice one …
expecting more
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सबै हामी मिल्यौं भने नाट्य पर्दा केका लागि ?
भेद नाच्ने पर्दा ढाल्ने हात हुनु कति मजा
वाह वाह !
क्या राम्रो
गजलकारिता राम्ररी
तिखार्नु भएकोमा भोलाजीलाई सलाम
Great!! Ananda aayo Mitra ko gajal Padera. Hoping more in future.
म ताली बजाउदैछु है पुरानाघरे जि।
Nice Gazal,..
भोला दाई तपाइको गजल एकदमै राम्रो लाग्यो । आउँदा दिनहरुमा तपाईँका अरु रचनाहरु पनि पढ्न पाउँ। प्रगतिको कामना
Thank you all dear valued readers for the invaluable commentry on my gazal, worth acknowledging and anticipating.
I am really really glad to see Govindaji, Theirmalaya and Asoc as the new faces to comment my creation. I welcome and appreciate your initiation and effort to comment this gazal.