जुम्होलरीको हिउँ पग्लेछ
आर. पी. सुब्बा
अमेरिका
जुम्होलरीमा
हिउँ पग्लेछ कि क्या हो,
हिमालको माथिल्लो
भागतिर
हिउँको बाफ
उडे जस्तो लाग्छ
सायद अब-
त्यहाँका खोला-नदीमा
पानीको मात्रा
बढेर आउँछ कि?
त्यहाँका चट्टानमा
वर्षौ सम्म विराजमान
विशाल हिउँका पाप्राहरु
हाम्रा छाप्रामा बालिएका
माचिसको मधुरो तापले
पगाल्न सक्ला र
सायद त्यहाँ
ठुलै ताप पो आयो कि?
Dear RP sir,
First of all receive my Bhutani Namaskar.
On reading your creation I felt that by keeping such invaluable creations unpublished you have done injustice to all of us(take positively). The vast treasury of sense of patriotism in you and the forecasting vision of urs through creation is so praise worthy. Your, of course, short work in look carries the whole Mahabharat of our cause. Thank you so much for this. Your creation has encouraged me to read our past for many more times through chapters. Receive my salute with these lines:
त्यहाँका चट्टानमा
वर्षौ सम्म विराजमान
विशाल हिउँका पाप्राहरु
हाम्रा छाप्रामा बालिएका
माचिसको मधुरो तापले
पगाल्न सक्ला ….
California, USA
Dear RP daju,
Read your beautiful peom; thought you are not just a writer or a potential community leader, but also a never-known-but-established POET. Accept my sincere appreciations for such a wonderful timely written poem. We can’t really wait to read more of such peoms.
Kindly,
TP Mishra
New York City