उनको याद
आज भोलि किन किन उनको याद आउँछ
अनायासै आँखा भरि आँसु त्यसै छाउँछ ।
किन होला उनको याद आउँछ घरीघरी
उनकै तस्विर देख्छु म त मेरै वरिपरि ।
संसारकै सुन्दर केटी मलाई उनी लाग्यो
उनलाई जीवनसंगी पर्ने इच्छा मनमा जाग्यो ।
किन होला उनीतिरै जान्छ मेरो यो मन
उनलाई जीवनसंगी पाए सफल हुन्थ्यो जीवन ।
उनको ओठमा लाली थियो आँखाभरि गाजल
चौतारीमा देखेँ उनलाई यो मन भयो पागल ।
चन्द्र जस्तो मुहार उनको कालो लामो केश
देख्दा उनलाई यस्तो लाग्थ्यो परीको हो भेष ।
मुटुभित्र लेखिसकेँ उनको मैँले नाम
उनको लागि भोक प्यास भुलिदिन्छु काम ।
हिजो राति सपनीमा उनलाई मैँले देंखेँ
उनलाई पाउने आसै आसमा प्रेम पत्र लेखे ।
Dear Chabiji !!!
I rerad your poem UNKO YAAD. It really reflects the mental situation of the avereage Bhutanese youth. The poem is pathetic and some what has pathos of teenage youths. It would be more appreciable if you write the poems of the current national concerns.
I would be really conteted if you paste some poems on the national concerns and present scenarios.
Writing can be possible to every one but our real value rests at the cretical writing over the present concerns. We have many concerns, you have brought one of the them in this poem. Let you be able to explore other issues like this.
Really, I see some buds of a good poet on you. come on keep it up.
chabiji,
i really appreciate your writing hope you will continue the writing adding more and more bricks on the building of bhutanese literature.
I like u r creation. hope u will kip it up.