गजल-९
-राजु सुब्बा
एट्लान्टा, अमेरिका
तिमी साथ हुँदा जस्तो यो रात छैन
एकान्तमा छु तिम्रै मायाको मात छैन
जूनेली रात मन्द बतास तिम्रै अभाव
साद झैं स्पर्स गर्ने कोमल हात छैन
त्यस समय देखे जस्तो आज म छैन
सब ब्यस्त भीडको रङ्गभित्र साथ छैन
तिमी साथ हुँदा हार नै जीत हुन्थ्यो
साथ नहुँदा आज नयाँ प्रभात छैन
तिम्रै अभावमा अपूर्ण भई बाफिई बस्दा
हेमन्तको हाँगा झै भाछु बाँच्ने पात छैन ।
Rajuji !!
Thank you for one mre creation on Gazal. I read it time and again and found the hungerness of quality in this gazal.
Anyway ! your ceartion is worth reading forever. I hope you will give morein days to home.
I enjoyed reading this gazal with some sense of similar mind inside mind. Your connection of subject and its theme is admirable in this gazal.
Dear Mama !
Its very charming n i found enormous feeling that is seen in this controversial life , i hope the contribution from such a good artists is highly acknowledged . keep on creating n deserving in this fields.