गजल-३
तिम्रो मेरो विपनाको सपना पो देखुँ लाग्यो
एउटा कथा जवानीको सम्झनामा लेखुँ लाग्यो
एक्लै आउथ्यौ दोबाटोमा तिमी पर्खिबस्या हुन्थ्यौ
एकान्तमा तिमीलाई नै त्यसै गरी भेटुँ लाग्यो
सास थाम्थ्यौ बिना जाडो तिमी त्यसै थर्थराउथ्यौ
त्यही क्षणको अँगालोमा तिम्लाई समेटुँ लाग्यो
भेट नहुँदा तिमीसंग एउटा गीत गुनगुनाउँथें
त्यही गीत भायोलिनमा आज फेरि रेटुँ लाग्यो
Hi Aajniviji,
“Timro mero bipanako sapanapo dekhu lagyo”
a wonderful line.
Always
Sanchaman Khaling
PA, United States
Moving, hence am drunk! Some memories are not so passé unless tried to feel at close quarters. Ain’t it? Nice piece u have coined…
hai raj how ur doing?today i got chance to enjoy with your GAJAL which was very fantastic and beautiful i really appreciate man.any way let your aspectation and dimensional viewpoints that you operate from your minds comes true always.i wish you wonderful writings.see u.keep it up.
Dear uncle,
its good and beautiful expression in nepali .it may touch many beloved hearts. May ur gajal always remain in the path where we can read and understand. It is also a best saying and idea to confirm our skill. go through it ,take care bye
गोरेटा र गल्लीहरु दोहोरिएको होकी लाग्यो
सपनीका यादहरु बिपनामै सोचु लाग्यो
सम्झनामा यादहरु सल्बलौन थालिसके
गजल फेरी उन्कैसामु दोहोर्याएर पढ़ुलाग्यो
स्वर्णिम टुक्रा हाम्रोलागी पस्कनुभयेकोमा अजनबीजीलाई धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद
its really a natural dai i like it much