गजल- ७
-राजु सुब्बा
एट्लान्टा, अमेरिका
छोरालाई खोज्दा खोज्दै शरीर गल्दैछ मेरो
कहाँ कसरी भेट्ने मन यो जल्दैछ मेरो ।
जता हेर्छु त्यतै देख्छु छोराको छाया
एक दिन भेट्ने आशमा जीवन चल्दैछ मेरो।
कोही भन्छ मोर्चामा लागेर आन्दोलन गर्दैछ
छोरो भेट्ने भोकले मन बल्दैछ मेरो ।
कोही भन्छ गोली लागेर शिविरमा बेहाल छ
थरिथरिका कुराले भेट्ने आशा छल्दैछ मेरो।
छोरो सोच्दा सोच्दै पुगेँछु अर्कै देशमा
गोली चल्दा सोच्दछु बाँच्ने आशा ढल्दैछ मेरो ।।
really fantastic.i love to read ur dynamic creation which captures the naked realities of bhutanese
Raju ji
Welcome to the Bhutaneseliterature.com
This site really is in need of the writers like you. You creations used to be very outstanding in the past. I hope you have been writing in the same caliber and with the similar charms.
The gazal you have posted in the site is really owesome. you are a notable gazal writer in Bhutan who can gerner charms in writing.
I wish you must have joined the site much more than today. Any way , you have come. I will be happy to see your revervation in poetry and in Gazal.
Your creations are capable to speak by themself, please give the medium of tone to the Bhutaneseliterature.com in the future so that you will get greater glorification.
Hope you will continue to contribute your articles and commentries.